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You write so well๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ

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Thank you so much Bolanle.

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This is really good. Well done, you!

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I'm teary! Thank you Amyn

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Apr 23, 2022Liked by Oludamola Oni

My gawd!!! This is too brilliantly put together. The twist was a pleasant, but yet unpleasant shock lol. Saw all you did there ๐ŸŒš๐Ÿ‘ Amazing piece! Amazing!

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Thanks man. Appreciate. Share with those white friends of yours too. Lol

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Apr 18, 2022Liked by Oludamola Oni

โ€œTo the heavensssssโ€ Lol

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Hahahaha. Getting to bring everything together to this ending was the most enjoyable part of the writing process for me. I loved getting "to the heavens" hahaha

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Apr 18, 2022Liked by Oludamola Oni

Nahhhhhhhh, This was good. Never would I have imagined that ending but it made so much beautiful sense. An amazing piece, Damola

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Thank you so much Moyo. I enjoyed the ending too. Glad it makes sense to readers.

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A writer! โ™ฅ๏ธ๐ŸŒน

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My friend, The Writer! Merci

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Mehn... This is good. The read from the first line to the very last is beautiful. Kudos!

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Thank you so much for your kind words.

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Apr 18, 2022Liked by Oludamola Oni

Wow, just wowโ€ฆ you should be given an award for this

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Hahaha. Thank you so much. Know an award you can recommend me for? Hahah

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Mad!!!

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Thank you for reading

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Apr 17, 2022ยทedited Apr 17, 2022Liked by Oludamola Oni

Two of the most beautiful forms of love whisked, blended, rolled and baked into this very captivating short story. It is like that favourite dessert one can never get enough of. This Easter cake warms my belly, E choke and I loveeeee it.

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Samiah. Thank you so much. You are too kind. Glad you loved it.

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